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My Twilight Poetry

Poetry to me is the expression of one’s own heartbeat. Just as its rhythmic presence fluctuates or subsides at different intervals of our lives. Poetry is universally recognized by all. There is an immediate touch Melancholy Yesterday Tomorrow Skulking somewhere in the deep The voices echo Through my head The voices are foreign I cant quite make out the sound But you are here I know Please kiss my love I say to you Kiss the thought I have so new In the shadow of the dawn There was the touch That everyone looks toward The light... My twilight poetry “If it is a miracle any sort of evidence will answer but if it is a fact than proof is necessary.” Mark Twain Brooke Dylan 2014

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Robert Lindley

Date: 5/28/2014 10:46:00 PM

My friend this is an exceptional piece. One that reveals both the talent of the author and the universal appeal of poetry.. Huge Bravo!!!!!

Jt Nyx

Date: 5/25/2014 12:31:00 PM

Hi Brooke, I enjoyed this composition. I find peace in writing and it is something I cherish. Through this piece, I see you feel the same. Keep writing and I will keep reading. TFS . Congrats on being a "New Best Poet". Take care~ Jess

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/25/2014 8:33:00 AM

I love every word except the one "Skulking" for me it has a negative feel that seems foreign to the rest of the piece. In my minds eye I have replaced it with "languishing".

Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/22/2014 6:27:00 AM

This is a great description of poetry. There are so many good lines here but the one that really grabs me is "skulking somewhere in the deep" I have felt that way about the words when buried truths were demanding to be written.

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/22/2014 4:39:00 PM

Hi Monterey.. how are you?? so good to see you my friend.. thanks

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/21/2014 6:49:00 PM

I see we both see poetry as gifted treasures cast from the true heart to pleasure and help others in life. A brilliant write my friend. Voices in my head strike me until I deliver their music..

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/21/2014 5:37:00 PM

I loved that first line, because I feel the same way about poetry. If it's not written from the heart and the soul, then it doesn't seem real to me.... Your poem was written and expressed so beautifully, Brooke. Nice work, my friend!

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/26/2014 11:33:00 AM

Thank you so much Kelly... Have a great Memorial day

Diane Christian

Date: 5/21/2014 2:55:00 PM

a nice poem

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/25/2014 10:32:00 PM

THANK YOU Diane

James Hyler

Date: 5/21/2014 12:01:00 PM

Thank you for sharing :)

Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/25/2014 10:30:00 PM

THANK YOU for visiting James