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My Turquoise Sea

A memory triggered by my cologne A crisp clean scent, like morning dew Days of chaos and confusion Hoping for relaxation The sound of a gentle rain tape playing in the background Lulling the children to sleep at rest time Laundry, dishes, housework and ten children Day after day Monotony Then there was the neighbor His smile, his laugh, his turquoise eyes Shining and dancing with magic His voice and words oozing charm His heart so sensitive and full of spirit Tenderness dripping from every vein of his body Sexy and mysterious, muscular and gentle His soul alive with adventure A drifter cowboy type He picked me up with one swift movement And placed me on a pedestal Rescuing me from the dreariness He pressed his lips to mine and I knew The ordinary quickly faded away My toes curled and my heart melted like butter I drifted as if caught in the wind on fairy dust Into the depths of the turquoise sea that surrounded me His eyes, my cologne, and the whirlwind of euphoria Copyright © 2009 Lena “Lolita” Townsend

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Date: 5/14/2009 12:50:00 PM
Beautiful, Lena! I love turquise - amazing. thanks for your always wonderful comments, love, Kristin
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Date: 5/9/2009 7:52:00 AM
Hi Lolita... wonderful... marvelous... just loved it.. beautifully written ! ... ps thanks for the comment :)
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Date: 5/7/2009 7:49:00 AM
Thank you for your bolg comments today Lolita.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/6/2009 11:57:00 PM
Lovely love poetry Lolita.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 5/6/2009 2:16:00 PM
Sounds like a fairy tale Cinderella : ). So beautifully written. Swept away in your 'Turquoise Sea'. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/6/2009 1:36:00 PM
An absolutely breathtaking account of a man whos charms transport you to a "whirlwind of euphoria." You give hope to those who feel trapped by mundane existences. And, wow, those turquoise eyes must captivate! Beautiful poem, Lolita! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/6/2009 12:56:00 PM
Lena I love the way this poem takes the ordinary and uses the gift of love to make it extra-ordinary - The content of this poem is priceless, YF4L - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 5/6/2009 11:47:00 AM
And swept you off your feet.....lucky girl!!!
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Date: 5/6/2009 11:05:00 AM
Sounds like the thrill of catching butterflies ... pretty convincing write and one dynamic with emotion ... what a beautiful canvas of words to paint love's story. Praises
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