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Below is the poem entitled MY TURNS which was written by poet Jacob Victuss. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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All coincidences find me bitter
Much as most hearts tend to be sweeter
I hardly get my sovereign right to glitter
The fact defy my humble chance to treat her

My rudeness blind folded the star
The aim was always the moon but then i was far
Boarding trains aiming for a Porsche car
Just like engaged to freedom aiming for her

These trials have been routine, i must say
The same result of boredom, God i must pray
I am far away here, afraid i wont come, here i must stay
If truly you can take it, then please wait for me on that day

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  1. Date: 9/11/2012 2:22:00 AM
    your writing can make someone feel exactly what your feeling just from reading it....nice work!