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My Turn

That morning! Seemed to arise late And I was to get up earlier that day; No time to feel that salubrious ambiance, And no minute to yawn or relax! Coz, hundreds and fifties were waiting before my turn! Yes, it was for the priceless fluid- Flows like a silver surge on a hosepipe. Women frenzied with their containers And men appalling near them! And I with a nostalgic deliberation- Pondered why it was made insufficient? After a series of thoughts-flashed the certainty: Everything’s because of us and only because of us! I then muted myself and moved ahead for my turn, unwilling to lose my chance for it.

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Date: 12/27/2015 1:46:00 PM
LOVE IT
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Date: 10/26/2011 8:44:00 AM
Had not realized where I had seen you, then checked the soup...my apologies for lateness in welcoming you to the soup...luv shannon
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Date: 9/20/2011 9:42:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Nanthinii. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Nanthinii Mohan
Date: 9/30/2011 11:17:00 AM
Thanks you very much for checking out my page carol...........nanthinii mohan

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