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My Truest Vessel

Trapped, is the love flowing in my heart If you chose me that would be smart. I would hold you honor and obey Bringing you happiness which would stay. My hopes lie within this lonely soul Having much love to give beyond all control. Held captive by the pain many put me through Still, I wait for someone who will be true. In hopes for the day together we nestle This heart it shall remain my truest vessel.

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/29/2014 3:56:00 PM

"They serve those who patiently stand and wait"....that's why I believe in hope! and your wishes will come true as well...// congrats // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/29/2014 5:36:00 AM

Well constructed and penned poem. Congrats on a fine win, jo-el

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2014 1:13:00 AM

Jo-el, Congratulations! Thank you for the support. Enjoy my latest blog if you like. It's called "Lunatics On The Loose." Stay tuned, I'll have a new contest coming up in a few days. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2014 1:01:00 AM

Jo-el, I do love this, and how sweet and deep your love goes... You have so much to give... LINDA

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 3/16/2014 1:09:00 AM

wow 48 hours.. I'm excited for you. What's the name of the book?

Jo-El Gerber
Date: 3/16/2014 1:05:00 AM

Thank you so much for your comment Linda. I greatly appreciate it. I am so excited. I am within 48 hours of having my very own first book of poetry published and it is truly an exciting thing. I look forward to reading more from you.