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My True Love

. No I have not forgot you my Precious love Each write I must fight The onslaught of thought Of you And your magical Touch No I have not forgot you my Wonderful friend Noah My true love My Son

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Joe Maverick

Date: 9/12/2016 7:50:00 AM

A great joy in its simplicity and rightness James, you have done really well..'

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/27/2015 10:38:00 PM

love the succinctness of this write but striking hard!~Olive Eloisa =')

Marilyn Williams

Date: 8/24/2015 11:39:00 AM

Touching and warm.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/23/2015 8:06:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this emotive piece once again.

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/20/2015 7:07:00 PM

Very evocative meaning in a few words! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Jan Allison

Date: 8/19/2015 7:34:00 PM

what a charming poem James congrats on poem of the day:-) hugs jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 8/19/2015 7:03:00 PM

Congratulations on Poem of the Day

Zakhe Michael Mcunu

Date: 8/19/2015 6:42:00 PM

Nice, keep the good work coming.

Marilyn Williams

Date: 8/19/2015 12:51:00 PM

You should never forget your children, Nice touch Great Pod!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/19/2015 12:18:00 PM

Congratulations on Poem Of The Day, beautiful poem and very heartwarming with so much love.

James Horn

Date: 8/19/2015 10:36:00 AM

My Son poem was well done and off your back bet is a ton. Jim Horn

James Peranteau
Date: 8/19/2015 11:25:00 AM

TY for the read dear poet! Noah is but twelve, and far from off of mine back! I am the single parent and still am feeding his machine; his thews! Have a wonderful week Mr. Horn....much love, james

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/19/2015 10:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD!

Neva Romaine

Date: 8/19/2015 10:02:00 AM

Hey James, BIG congratulations on your poem being chosen for POTD! This a lovely and emotional piece filled with love. Beautifully expressed. Be Blessed, Neva

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/18/2015 10:19:00 PM

This is really touching... amazing work!!! That's all I have to say. Always, Laura

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/18/2015 3:33:00 PM

Good reading this James, hope all's good there, Joe.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/18/2015 10:55:00 AM

no one forgets a son, james.. how heartwarming and poignant is this splendid write.. huggs

Tim Smith

Date: 8/17/2015 5:20:00 PM

A great piece James. We can never forget our children even if we cant be with them as much as we like.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2015 4:00:00 PM

I LOVE this dedication to Noah. Wonderful one, James!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/17/2015 11:19:00 AM

Goosebps..Only another parent can understand this deep feeling one carries for his kid.This is beautiful and a Fav. I wonder how Noah must have grown up now...Lovely.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 8/17/2015 11:20:00 AM

goosebumps I meant oops : )

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/17/2015 11:16:00 AM

Your poem falls within the category of whimsical, fanciful and imaginative; armed with an energy of its own that lights our hearts. Emile.