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My Tree Tops

How cool the morning, Tiny clouds drifting above tall summer tree tops, As I lean back in my giant striped lawn chair Their leaves flicker as citron flickers Fascinating my senses pelted by dew drops. I anticipate the day’s activities And long for cool breezes of the day, Blowing through my tree tops, Until twilight falls.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 9/5/2020 10:49:00 AM
Our twilight is becoming warmer now as we are entering (rather have entered) our Spring, and the blossoms are just too breathtaking for words, and the leaves are beginning to grow. the circle of living life is like the circle of weather. Lovely poem Sunlite Wanter. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/6/2020 8:14:00 AM
What a comment to treasure! Thank you.
Date: 8/29/2020 10:13:00 AM
Sounds lovely....
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/6/2020 8:14:00 AM
A very sincere thank you!
Date: 8/28/2020 10:49:00 PM
Awesomely pictured from a lawn chair wow, I like your imagery and I love trees. Kudos!! ........... .............. .,............ Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/6/2020 8:16:00 AM
I appreciate your close observance.
Date: 8/27/2020 6:49:00 PM
Well written, I was wishing I was there while reading it.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/6/2020 8:17:00 AM
That is a very encouraging comment!

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