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My Tranquil Drug

When I think about the woods I’m Humbled by the architecture of the naked trees Solid, tranquil, every reaching as I climb Higher towards the southerly breeze In Beaulieu, when it rains mother can be seen Dashing out between the showers to pull the weeds She misses many stuck in between Which the wind carries and the plant reseeds At the river mouth the water turns And the swans take off graciously over the tide pool The ducklings settle back into the ferns Settle down hazy mist and make the evening cool Strong floral scents carried far on a zephyr Echoing sound of match point from the court Baby calves playfully jump and softly nose the heifer Hear their mooing chatter as they lightly cavort The donkey foals have such big heads Post-like legs with sturdy feet They need big pillows for their beds They look so cuddly and oh so sweet Hey where’s the water gone? Someone’s pulled the plug When will I see the return of the swan? To my home, my tranquil drug

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Date: 10/16/2016 10:14:00 AM
A lovely descriptive write Sarah.
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Date: 10/3/2016 11:23:00 PM
A true pastoral experience, Sarah. This poem bespeaks the serene side of nature. Your words have such a calming effect on the reader. You have a very deft touch in that regard. Continue expressing such harmonious views and you have me hooked on that mind-soothing tranquil drug as well. Love your style of writing, it's quite evocative. Keep the love and knowledge flowing. Much love and more love to you and yours.
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Date: 10/2/2016 8:21:00 AM
If this is an earthly experience, heaven's gonna be a puffy disappointment. Spirit is real. You've just refilled my tank.
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Date: 10/2/2016 8:34:00 AM
That's such a sweet thing to say, thank you ;-) I sat writing it up as I sit here now watching it all again. I'm addicted...

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