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I was six when I first had a tooth decay, I spent squalling in pain almost the whole day; When my mum brought me to a male dentist, I ran away upon seeing his muscles and big wrist. She took me back home and asked my dad, “What shall we do with our child, she’s so coward?” My dad patiently cuddled me as I sat on his lap, “Take this aspirin my little girl, soon the pain will stop.” While my dad was coaxing me, He told me a tale of a tooth fairy He made me believe that she will come at night To replace my aching tooth---so new and white. While I was attentively listening to him, The soporific aspirin drew me to a sweet little girl’s dream, The tooth fairy appeared real in my sight In her silver gown and hair-dress, dazzled me so bright! She smiled at me and asked for just one wish, She gently blew one big flying magic kiss, Fruity- toothpaste’s bubbles meander everywhere As she waved her golden wand, fairy dusts filled the air. I moved around stretching my arms with glee, Jumping once and a while with the enchantment I see; I giggled and screamed until my dad woke me up I told him about my dream, my joy was on top. Dad asked me to open my mouth to check my teeth He found a new one coming out from underneath My decayed milk tooth was moving to and fro He tied and yank with a yarn…he was my dentist and a fairy, too.
Aug. 25, 2013 6.30am ©2013by Leonora Galinta All Rights Reserved First Place Contest: Fairy Dust Judged: 10/16/2013 Sponsor: Poet Nathan A

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Date: 2/4/2014 3:09:00 PM
nice narrative
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Date: 10/20/2013 9:35:00 PM
Hi Leonora, thank you for the nice hello. nice Fairy Dust, winning poem........... love ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/20/2013 5:30:00 PM
Awww, so sweet, Leonora. No wonder you walked away with the winning prize. Congratulations on your winning the contest with this gem, my friend. Licia :-)
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Date: 10/18/2013 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win my dear friend Leonora ;) so like it!! How are you, Iv'e been busy even if its my vacation but its okay...Have a nice day and God bless you always!!! mwuah!! ;)
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Date: 10/17/2013 3:52:00 PM
Such a charming story would have to place at the top! Congratulations to you Leonora!! A lovely sweet poem!
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/18/2013 1:35:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend Carrie.
Date: 10/17/2013 3:42:00 PM
Leonora this is magical I love it congrats on win Shadow x smile
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/18/2013 1:35:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend Shadow.
Date: 10/17/2013 11:35:00 AM
Congrad's on your verse winning! Such a nice memory! Light & Love
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/18/2013 1:35:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend Deb.
Date: 10/17/2013 10:31:00 AM
Good morning SIS, enjoying this one again. Nice to see it on Nate's list. I think he enjoyed it cause you took the fairy idea to a different level. Nice thinking. Glad your dad in this poem. Was the dentist and tooth fairy... Congratulations my dearest and most favorite poet... always enjoying your dazzling and bright writes... hugs and lots of love.. Linda
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/18/2013 1:34:00 AM
Good morning my dearest sis! Can't believe I won in this simple story/poem. Thanks a lot anyway for continuously enjoying my writes. Please say, thanks to dear Nate for me for appreciating & enjoying my poem. My heartfelt congratulations on your awesome wins too, including the other recent wins. So late to come 'cuz of spate of work. Big hugs to u!
Date: 10/17/2013 8:28:00 AM
Lovely piece, Congratulations on this perfect win.
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Len Gasun
Date: 10/18/2013 1:26:00 AM
Thank you so much my dear friend Richard.
Date: 10/16/2013 10:29:00 PM
I don't know why, Leonora your title rocks. congrats. Nate
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Date: 10/18/2013 1:26:00 AM
My humble thanks my dear friend Nate. I'm glad you appreciated my poem for your contest. I can't believe I'm on top of your list. Thank you so much anyway.. I'll come back and try to thank you on your wall;))). Have a wonderful day. Please say Hi, to my dearest sis and friend PD.
Date: 10/15/2013 2:06:00 AM
I like the style of your poem
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Date: 9/7/2013 10:22:00 PM
!!!
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Date: 9/6/2013 7:45:00 AM
Hello Sweetie sis... stopping by to send you more hugs... haha could not help it... xox~ hugs xox~ hugs :-) Linda
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Date: 9/5/2013 6:30:00 PM
thanks for your birthday wish, sweetie. Hope you are enjoying the start of September.
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Date: 9/4/2013 4:48:00 PM
What a beautiful mind and memory you have. Your Dad is a great guy. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 9/3/2013 4:31:00 PM
Hi My sweetest sis... miss you.. sending you soup mail... xox~ Linda
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Date: 9/2/2013 5:16:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Sweet memories. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 9/2/2013 1:10:00 AM
I am so lucky, 52 and no cavities. I enjoyed this sweet tale.
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Date: 9/1/2013 1:23:00 PM
Paternal memories can be so sweet especially to young impressionable young lady. Nicely done, Lenora. Allan
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Date: 9/1/2013 12:01:00 PM
Very nice memory of your childhood, enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/29/2013 11:26:00 AM
so like it my dear friend Leonora.. I remembered my mother hold a thread on both sides of my teeth and pulled it..I didn't cried...your poem is so cuteeeee!! good luck in the contest...mwuah!! God bless you always..miss you!!
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Date: 8/29/2013 8:22:00 AM
Ouch... SIS! I remembered my first cavity after reading your poem.. This is a very nice and sweet poem.. I never likes my visit to the dentist lol... creepy, I'm glad you gave me joy after reading this poem.. thank you very much for sharing... love love... Linda
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Date: 8/28/2013 5:14:00 PM
A delightful memory of childhood...I enjoyed reading this sweet write! Hugs
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Date: 8/26/2013 3:35:00 PM
this is a really cute way of telling the story, Leonora. You are coming up with some pretty great poetry these days!!
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Date: 8/26/2013 1:13:00 PM
wonderful poem Leonora...the ending was great...hugs
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