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My Thoughts Are Stars

"My thoughts are stars I cannot fathom into constellations." - John Green _____________ They all glow with varied fury with raging heat, emitting light Each a small piece of a story or a character in the night Some will capture brief attention as they streak across my sky Dipping in and out of focus fleeting past my mind’s dull eye A few twinkle in sheer beauty in buoyant reds and whites and blues Others flounder, out of vision in dim undiscerning hues Some explode before they vanish and get lost to time and space but spread their magic far and wide to make my mind a better place Oh, these specks of light might guide me as one-by-one, I see and grin But to view as constellations? - No, I really can’t begin

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Date: 1/19/2017 9:08:00 PM
Oh gosh, what a thrilling read, David. Great take on the quote. It's fluid, competent, deep, and full of sensational imagery. Thanks forsharing
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David Lindsay
Date: 1/21/2017 11:14:00 PM
Thanks Phillip :)

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