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My Thoughts

My thoughts are here My thoughts are there My thoughts are everywhere But when I think I start to blink Because I'm not aware

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Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 3/4/2018 12:22:00 PM

thanks Vera for reading my poem Mother. I today talked to my mom after a long time . she is ill and 70 i think. Happy to know your mom is going to be 100. May this Rose of you remain evergreen and blossom always in your life........ thanks and pay salam(peace) to your mom from me as well

Vera Duggan
Date: 3/6/2018 11:21:00 PM

You are welcome Muhammed, regards to your Mum. take care.......Vera

Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 3/4/2018 12:21:00 PM

it is a great art to capture small moments of life in paper for ever. You did your job well Thanks and take care Vera

Vera Duggan
Date: 3/6/2018 11:20:00 PM

Thank you so much Muhammed, take care......Vera

Sona Wilae

Date: 1/3/2018 9:48:00 PM

Beautiful rhyming scene. I'm not sure of the form, however, it's not syllabic but rather AAABBA...and it's NICE!

Vera Duggan
Date: 1/4/2018 9:44:00 PM

Hi Sona, thank you so much for this comment, I am not sure of the form either but I enjoyed writing, take care......Vera

Akkina Downing

Date: 1/3/2018 9:35:00 PM

Hahaha... so me lots of times! Awesome poem Vera, I sure did enjoy this a lot! Hugs and smiles :)

Vera Duggan
Date: 1/4/2018 9:35:00 PM

Hi Akkina, this is also me, thoughts sometimes run away with me, thank you so much for the lovely comment, glad you enjoyed it, take care......Vera

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/3/2018 5:39:00 PM

ha! i can sure relate to this one, vera...

Vera Duggan
Date: 1/4/2018 9:33:00 PM

I'm sure we all can ilene, thank you so much for reading, hope you are enjoying your snowy weather, take care my friend.....Vera

Old Buck

Date: 1/1/2018 1:40:00 PM

Vera: I can't believe someone wrote the "life history" of my brain in 7 short lines. :o) Thank you for sharing those "thoughts" with all of us here on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck

Vera Duggan
Date: 1/1/2018 6:18:00 PM

Hi Old Buck: I should imagine this would be for everyone, we all have thoughts, but I hate having them at night when I am trying to sleep, thank you very much for the comment and take care......Vera

Anisha Dutta

Date: 12/31/2017 11:33:00 PM

So very right you are. Happy New Year.

Vera Duggan
Date: 1/1/2018 3:46:00 AM

Thank you Anisha and thank you for visiting my site, take care and A HAPPY NEW YEAR.....Vera

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/31/2017 6:41:00 PM

This definitely qualifies as "Food for Thought." What I like best is that you can read this poem over and over again. It really grows on you, in a positive way.

Vera Duggan
Date: 12/31/2017 10:29:00 PM

Thank you so much Gershon for visiting my page, take care and A HAPPY NEW YEAR.......Vera

R. L. Mccallum

Date: 12/31/2017 6:05:00 PM

I loved it. Well rendered verse. Keep writing!!

Vera Duggan
Date: 12/31/2017 6:19:00 PM

Hi Robert, thank you so much for the visit and reading this little verse HAPPY NEW YEAR and take care......Vera

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/31/2017 5:13:00 PM

Your poem captures a moment we all go through from time to time..well articulated, Vera.

Vera Duggan
Date: 12/31/2017 6:17:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay, yes we all have thoughts but I only like the good ones HAPPY NEW YEAR and take care.....Vera

Jan Allison

Date: 12/31/2017 4:53:00 PM

what a cute rhyme Vera I can relate!:-) I send you my very best wishes for 2018:-) hugs jan xx

Vera Duggan
Date: 12/31/2017 6:12:00 PM

Hi Jan, thank you for this lovely comment, I am sure a lot of people can relate to this verse, sometimes I have trouble sleeping because of things going around in my head,anyway my dear HAVE A HAPPY NEW YEAR and take care.......Vera xx

Paul Callus

Date: 12/31/2017 8:57:00 AM

This is the second time I'm reading this sweet poem, Vera. Our thoughts come and go as they please and often we have no control over them! ~ Best regards // paul

Vera Duggan
Date: 12/31/2017 6:08:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading again on this site Paul, my thoughts alway come and go, I hate thinking when I am trying to sleep. HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU AND YOUR LOVELY FAMILY....Vera.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/30/2017 7:22:00 PM

That is because we love life so much our mind tends to flicker with all the happy thoughts ... love the thoughts Hugs Eve

Vera Duggan
Date: 12/30/2017 11:20:00 PM

Thank you so much Eve, very true but sometimes my thoughts just run away with me and sometimes my thoughts interfere with my sleep, hope you are well and take care in the new year.....Vera

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/30/2017 1:50:00 PM

- Lovely written, dear Vera :) - A pleasure to read from you - My best wishes for a peacefull new year, and I thank you for your friendship through the year 2017 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan
Date: 12/30/2017 6:36:00 PM

Ah! Anne-Lise my dear friend, how lovely to hear from you, as you can see I haven't written lately but these few words came to mind and Peter said jot them down so I say thank you so much for this lovely comment, it has been an absolute pleasure having you as a friend, have a happy new year and take care....Love Vera...

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/30/2017 6:31:00 AM

Yes, you're right to blink...that's when it starts to get confusing... All the best Vera

Vera Duggan
Date: 12/30/2017 6:33:00 PM

Hi Arturo, thank you ever so much for going to my page and reading these few words, you are right, actually there are times when life is confusing, take care and a Happy New Year....Vera