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My Swing

I walk loose slow slouched but straight smooth unknown Arms swing On comers avoid eye contact but I smile Hips swing No need to keep my joy contained locked away I share my sidewalk groove Fingers snap offbeat to a passing car’s rhythm Who cares? Birds sing I walk loose carefree Butterflies flit wings I'm not trying to be anyone else not even me No purpose in my stride Not trying to hide No particular place to be right-left-right-left tap-tap- of heels Hair swings I walk loose then pick up speed finding my direction regaining perspective The source of My joy Source of My swing All wait for me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/19/2015 6:37:00 AM
Rhonda it was great to get away from work and enjoy this walk with you. Lovely imagery ;) thank you for the smiles this afternoon
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Date: 6/18/2015 7:40:00 PM
It was nice walking with you, Rhonda !!! Thanks for taking me along !!
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Date: 6/17/2015 11:10:00 AM
I enjoyed this swinging piece!
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Date: 6/16/2015 12:17:00 PM
I like this from, and the music of it. Mike
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Date: 6/16/2015 6:40:00 AM
To me, this is a PERFECT description of those rare moments of living totally in the present, in the perfect and eternal NOW...Makes me want to go take a walk too (I need the exercise)
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Date: 6/15/2015 2:27:00 AM
awesome
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/15/2015 1:49:00 PM
Thanks, SKAT...one awesome, and I'm a happy girl! Hugs, Rhonda
Date: 6/14/2015 9:15:00 PM
Happy moods I love, it puts a smile on my face. Hugs Eve
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/15/2015 1:47:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and sweet comments, Eve. Hugs back to you, Rhonda

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