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My Sweetheart's Departure

Your departure is full of sorrow but i am always sure you will return tomorrow My feelings for you are very true till my last breathe i long for you When ever a trouble came on my way you sighed and with a gentle smile you sent it away I heard the words fun n laughter after you entered in my life,I could invite them with pleasure You are always by my side patting up my back and stepping me towards success side Dearest Sweetheart,these words are from bottom of my heart till the universe ends ,i will save them in my love cart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/13/2010 8:27:00 AM
I like the line regarding your feelings. The ending is also wonderful regarding your love cart. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/13/2010 7:03:00 AM
A beautiful poem of love full of emotion... well done.
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