My Sweet Shereen

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My Gorgeous daughter, Shereen Natalie Ghali

How is it that you're beautiful I really do not know Your dad and I are average we do not have your glow Could it be true, some goddess genes got somehow in the mix When you walk by, I see the eyes Of all the men transfix You've got the curves; you've got the class, and girl you have appeal I'm sure those boys who see you near Just wonder if you're real I know I'm just a silly mom, who likes to praise and dote But when I see you next to me I cannot help but gloat This Mama Bear is happy for her daughter is a Queen and like her name, she's very sweet my darling girl, Shereen Eileen Manassian Shereen is a Persian name which means "sweet" :)

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/1/2017 9:06:00 AM

She descended from a Warrior Princess so how could she not be gorgeous! Great poem Eileen. Hugs Rick.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/4/2017 8:10:00 AM

I treasure your post, Richard. It brings my heart great joy.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/31/2017 4:55:00 PM

oh, eileen, this is so beautiful! your daughter is just gorgeous and, despite the fact that you put yourself down, you are too! shereen should feel so good reading this poem...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/4/2017 8:34:00 AM

Thank you, dear. I did read it to her while we were Skyping. She was happy. :) You are very kind, dear. Sending lots of hugs.......

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/31/2017 3:44:00 PM

- A beautiful young lady, Eileen - Hope all is well with you all - hugs and <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/4/2017 10:58:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine, dear. You warm my page with your light. :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/31/2017 2:40:00 PM

This just confirms exactly where she gets her beauty! From you! This is such a Shereen and lovely poem! :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/4/2017 10:59:00 AM

Awwwww....how sweet, Arthur. You make me smile. Loved that lost line...a shereen poem. You got it!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/31/2017 2:37:00 PM

What a lovely tribute, and having seen her photo I know she's a stunner just like her lovely mum:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/4/2017 11:00:00 AM

Hugs, Jan. You certainly know how to make this heart of mine smile. Sending lots of hugs...