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My Sweet Potato Pie

It's love when you enter a room and give me these butterflies. No reason to try and hide keeping these emotions inside. You have me intoxicated from those sensations that you provide. Woman you remind me of Sweet Potato Pie. It's love when the phone rings and I rush to answer, praying it's you. She's a part of my goals now and all the things I want to do. Everyday is an adventure and always something new. Together we've healed old wounds, despite the pain both of us have gone through. A serene feeling of comfort when looking into your beautiful eyes. You're warm like Sweet Potato Pie. It's love when I purpose to her on Valentine's day. A life of bliss sealed with a kiss was my determined way. To make her mine for all time. My partner in crime. Like Bonnie and Clyde. She still gives me butterflies. I'll always have a sweet tooth for her like Sweet Potato Pie!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/10/2011 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jimmy. It is an honor to be on the list with you this week. May you find the inspiration to keep you writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2011 1:45:00 PM
Hey Jimmy, you know I never had one of those pies? You are such a natural rhymer you are still rhyming! every 2 lines end with an end rhyme! Light & Love
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Date: 6/7/2011 8:07:00 AM
Congratulations Jimmy, on being featured this week with this lovely write. I like sweet potato pie as well as the words you have penned. Best wishes for more writings~ Caryl
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Date: 6/6/2011 5:46:00 PM
Congrats Jimmy on "My Sweet Potato Pie" being featured. Vince
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Date: 12/4/2010 3:06:00 PM
Very nice.
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Date: 11/23/2009 1:10:00 PM
Heart warming write, it oozes tender emotions Jimmy, a joy to read >> James
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Date: 9/22/2009 9:42:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us today Jimmy. Excellent writing. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol
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