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My Sweet Divine

Before I go My sweet divine And embark the forbidden hands of time I shall ask of you one thing As I stand before you I see you crumble Sweet liquid luck Runs down your face But to you it doesn't seem so lucky You beg me to stay And scream my name And whisper sweet nothings Why, oh why Do you set my heart on fire With words instead of flames Promise me you'll remember The day we first met Your hair in a bun And your smile so sweet Like the earth of the Summer beneath

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/2/2016 11:27:00 PM
Diana,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/2/2016 9:00:00 PM
Diane, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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Diana Leger
Date: 7/2/2016 9:09:00 PM
Don't know why it did it twice and excuse the question marks
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Diana Leger
Date: 7/2/2016 9:09:00 PM
Don't know why it did it twice and excuse the question marks
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Diana Leger
Date: 7/2/2016 9:09:00 PM
Don't know why it did it twice and excuse the question marks
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Diana Leger
Date: 7/2/2016 9:07:00 PM
Thank you SKAT ??
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Diana Leger
Date: 7/2/2016 9:07:00 PM
Thank you SKAT ??

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