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My Sweet

Passionate memories crowd in my brain, a wished need so strong I just couldn’t resist- Our last sweet touch l i n g e r s , it's still ingrained, for without you my sweet, I wouldn’t exist... Spending FOREVER with you I insist- My hands are warm from your tender embrace, your hands warm caressing my lovely face- My eyes wish to see nothing except you, for you move with such remarkable grace. Our night of DESIRE is long overdue. I cherish moments with a d o r a t i o n, remembering the good old days of youth- Our love will pass on through generations and our family tree will know the truth... Throughout difficult troubles we sought ruth. Beliefs that God had already designed two longing SOULMATES forever entwined- Stand still in my heart for eternity, we are beauty and compassion combined- We must ALWAYS find hope internally. Rhyme Scheme: A-B-A-B-B-C-C-D-C-D 10 syllables per line Date Written: August 26, 2016 Poetry Unhinged Contest Date Finalized: August 31, 2016 Take The Dagger From My Heart, Please - Poetry Contest Sponsor, Broken Wings

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Date: 8/29/2016 11:24:00 PM
Laura, this a wonderful poem. Sooooooooooo touching. My best regards.
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Date: 8/27/2016 11:32:00 AM
a beautiful heartfelt poem LuLoo good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/26/2016 2:46:00 PM
A very emotional write, reveals a passionate heart..good luck in the contest
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