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My Swan

I am comtemplating if this is right, And if words can justify my heart; But when I see your face by the twilight, I can say that we'll never be apart. My falling star that i can wish upon. The beauty that out weighs all the universe, Is embedded in this person, my swan. The one who leaves my life with no remorse. Rainy days I sit on my door step to think. Although my mind is full of confusion, One thing's certain: I can write this with ink. I will be here without dissolution. You have become perfect in my bleak eye, My swan and my angel until I die.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/29/2009 6:51:00 AM
Lovely and romantic ! Nicely done!~ Carrie
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Date: 7/29/2009 1:58:00 AM
amazing piece! good write here_ eddie
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Date: 7/29/2009 1:27:00 AM
Nice sonnet. Keep writing. Sara
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