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My Surrender

Make me go to sleep Make me close my eyes As I take some time I surrender my habits Bless the lender of my worn fabrics Just once more a peaceful day, what a delight A soothing melody buries the night Make me go to sleep Make me close my eyes Does it feel like prison? For I cannot remove you from my thoughts If you will listen Your kindness burns my scars Like crystals of salt As I lay ill sipping this pure life I only ask How much more can you endure my wife? Make me go to sleep Make me close my eyes If you can bring me to my knees I am yours If not I remain a lost soul at another door I live life ugly, give me death I laugh at strangers In one final gasp I am Your Saddened Angel Make me go to sleep Make me close my eyes "Sunday wine & rewrites"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/13/2009 1:08:00 PM
Dear one, the making is for you to do, even if your wife could, you are on earth to make your own statement..your karma is your karma..be what you need to be. Light & Love
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