My Sun

You are my sun My little rainbow Those little cheeks Those little hands You hold my heart I hold yours In my hands in delight You are my sun A brightened day By your incomplete smile It means the day The light of day You are my sun My day in colours I care for you Not only by heart I wish to feed you Give you baths Hold your hand to school. You are my sun Not only today When you're old and scary I'll be your light I'll be the land you step on. The soil the sand. I love you. To my little unborn sibling

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Skat A

Date: 4/29/2016 11:41:00 AM

Nothando Ngoman, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/26/2016 11:15:00 PM

Hi NN, Nice & amazing first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2016 3:43:00 PM

A touching write, Nothando, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Moon Flower

Date: 4/26/2016 2:22:00 PM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Nothando. :)