My Star

My star said who I am My star said where I stand My star show me the way My star told me no way... My star gave me the faith My star gave me the hope My star showed me the light My star showed me the sight

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/6/2012 6:05:00 AM

This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.

Adriana Michaels

Date: 5/23/2012 3:20:00 PM

I like your star. Also your haiku.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/23/2012 5:05:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Bianca. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol