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My Star

My star is gone tonight, No twinkle for gone is the light. Dark clouds float slowly closer- Mother has hidden! And closer still- Brightness forbidden! This is absurd, I might just quake, And shake, My fist to give ‘em a word. The veil which conceals, My watching eye, It steals, A beauty of the sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/12/2011 9:32:00 PM
That is what usually happens when there is a cloudy sky at night. With simple wording, this entry delivers decent descriptiveness.
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Book: Shattered Sighs