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My Spirit Is Like a Hungry Flower In the Rain

My spirit is like a hungry flower in the rain Written By Dean Masciarelli December 14, 2009 My spirit is like a hungry flower in the rain That wants to continue to grow and climb As it soaks up everything until its time is done And when the sun No longer shines again My petals will fall one by one to the ground And then all of my seeds will be spread around To all the ones who I happened to leave behind So that they may continue to grow and blossom

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Date: 12/16/2009 1:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, your comments are as beautiful as your poems! love Simone
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Date: 12/15/2009 7:38:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Dean! This is straight from a generous heart! Peace to you today and always, Audrey Great job!
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Date: 12/14/2009 1:32:00 PM
Wonderful write dean...superb imagery and so beautiful. A fabulous message conveyed. Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read and your nice comments on my writes~Mary
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Date: 12/14/2009 5:17:00 AM
Great poem Dean. Guess that is why we have to work so hard to make sure the seed are good ones. -Robert
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Date: 12/14/2009 4:26:00 AM
Beautiful sentiments. Keep the magical and creative pen flowing with your gifts growing through the years to come. Sara
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Date: 12/14/2009 2:09:00 AM
beautiful piece of poetry here... loved the beginning as well, enjoyed and have a great night. :)
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Date: 12/14/2009 1:19:00 AM
If you live your life this way, your legacy will be timeless, Dean. Beautiful poem! Love, Carolyn
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