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My Soup Mothers

Oh mothers! Mothers! Mothers of the soup! I crave thy sacred saucer and super spoon, Thou make aroma flows from art in this pot of soup which makes our belly boom as you call and croon. Oh mighty mother! Sharon Weimer! Thou woo wealthy words, and wisdom wields; Thy sights and sounds are as hot as summer, Thou taught me not to yawn nor yearn but raise my yields Oh model mother, Carol Brown! Thy rhymes and rhapsodies are rich and real; Thou art a queen with a comely, colorful crown, I am addicted to munching thy melodious meal. Oh musical mother! Sue Mason! I am proud of thy pleasant, passionate pages; Thou build with pen and pad… a modern mason, No wonder your scripts are sacred: signed by saintly sages Oh mothers with beauty, brains and brawns I am proud of your vibes, virtues and voices; I love thy poetic prowess and… pink prawns, Oh my soup mothers! You do not nurse needless noises

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Date: 9/11/2009 10:28:00 AM
nicely nicely done, yes we all need those encouraging words.
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Date: 9/11/2009 7:23:00 AM
Ah, Adeile, you picked some great "mothers" to honor in this write. Sue Mason does indeed seem like a "saintly sage." Sharon and Carol have also provided much welcome support to many in Soupdom. Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/10/2009 11:24:00 PM
Nice Expressions - Beautifully Written MoonBee
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Date: 9/10/2009 10:20:00 AM
Highly praised art thou among woman soup moms. Such elegance in this work. Keep writing. Sara P.S. Thanks for the comments on my work.
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Date: 9/7/2009 2:35:00 PM
I am honored to be in such company, Adeleke. Thanks for being at PoetrySoup !!
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Date: 9/2/2009 7:31:00 AM
You are a sweetie pie! Are you a Mother too? Have you read my verse The Sowing? or The Body and the Blood? Please add you gifted lilt to my contest on dialects. Light & Love
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Date: 8/31/2009 6:58:00 PM
a very thoughtful poem well penned my friend!
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Date: 8/31/2009 8:02:00 AM
A wonderful tribute to three of the best!! Well said, Adeleke !! ~ Carrie
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