My Soulmate

My Soulmate You are my poem, the rhythm of my heart, Filling life with colours, a prism set apart. Your eyes glistening, pearls of dewy grace, Words melodious, a gentle coo to embrace. The sun rises for the world, you're my aurora bright, Weaving moments into life with your joyous light. Roses are lovely, and fragrant in my garden fair, Yours is the vibrant colour, the sweet scent in the air Mesmerizing tunes I play on life's flute, You are my breath, O beauty absolute.

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Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/4/2016 8:29:00 PM

Such a lovely and touchy, delightful, romantic write , I've enjoyed every little word......This is a master piece my friend....hugs / / :) dalia

Funom Makama

Date: 2/6/2015 8:01:00 AM

Reading your pages brings enjoyment and ease at heart. I love your style of craft and this is definitely a 7 for me.

BE Bailey

Date: 11/4/2014 2:18:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this piece Malik and how you put it together.Warm Regards "B"

Doris Jamoner

Date: 9/29/2014 1:40:00 PM

Such a Romantic poem. Really a touch of an artistic poet. ^^

Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/29/2014 11:17:00 PM

Many Many thanks Dear Doris, I am so obliged to pay you thanks for your words....

Leah Seilheimer

Date: 9/26/2014 11:24:00 PM

Very passionate, finding your soulmate really makes everything your everything, so loosing that takes everything

Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/28/2014 2:58:00 AM

exactly, this thing matters more than anything in life.... thanks for your visit Dear Leah.. Friend Always,,, Malik

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/20/2014 2:17:00 AM

Finally finding a soul mate changes everything about life. Colors seem brighter, flowers smell sweeter, and the sun shines warmer on us.... I really enjoyed this beautiful poem, Malik. Very nicely done!.... Welcome to Poetry Soup. I am looking forward to reading more of your work!

Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/20/2014 2:26:00 AM

So nice of you Dear kelly, thanks for your kind words.. yeah really soulmate is the meaning of our life.

Gautami Phookan

Date: 9/18/2014 6:45:00 AM

She'll be very happy to know this.. Beautiful words to your soul mate!You do write well Malik...

Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/18/2014 7:07:00 AM

Thanks for your sweet comment Gautami... god blesss

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2014 4:30:00 AM

- This is really beautiful and romantic, Malik - // Anne-Lise :)

Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/18/2014 4:37:00 AM

THANKS MANY MANY TIMES ANNE, YOU ARE SO KIND... HUGS

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/16/2014 11:10:00 PM

Sounds like you have found the right one! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/16/2014 11:12:00 PM

Thanks Anish for stopping by and for a nice comment..

Nontando Sibanda

Date: 9/15/2014 2:05:00 AM

Such a tender, peaceful and lovely couplet. Keep the ink dripping dear friend.

Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/15/2014 2:26:00 AM

really a sweet comment i got

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/11/2014 7:31:00 PM

Very sweet and romantic Malik! Such a tenderness indeed sounds like the sweet music of flutes and violins. I really enjoyed reading this one my poet friend. Keep writing! Best wishes to you! xxxx D.

Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/14/2014 11:07:00 PM

Many many thanks Dorian for stopping by and for your warm and kind words.. God bless you, Friend Always... Malik

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/8/2014 4:14:00 PM

This is immensely peaceful and romantic. Your rhymes too flow so nicely...like a delightful tune resonating through the midnight air...luscious words...passionate and poetic in every sense. Love! Always, Laura

Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/9/2014 1:38:00 AM

Your words are ,much sweeter and nice than my poem. I feel pleasure that you dropped in and read my poem and felt it worthy. Your words reflect your kind heart... keep smiling always.. HUGS Malik

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/5/2014 9:33:00 AM

I like this write and its freshness. Keeping play that flute and writing my friend!!!

Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/6/2014 5:37:00 AM

Oh really a nice way of encouraging, yeah really i wish the flute remain with me and the breaths of beloved, melody will come on its own.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 9/5/2014 7:38:00 AM

Wow!!endearing sweet write..:)

Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/6/2014 5:35:00 AM

sorry typing err. # thanks i mean :)

Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/6/2014 5:34:00 AM

Tanks for such a sweet reflection from a sweet poet