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My Soul Torn Apart

How fortunes turn, I awake by myself No company just a cold empty space, Beside me your picture sits on the shelf Each morn I gaze at your beautiful face. Often I weep, unsure what I'm feeling I struggle to breathe, for what is now left Once filled with love my mind is now reeling, My home is empty, my heart is bereft. Had I not ascended love's lofty heights I would have been spared the pain loss can bring, But would not have known of love's sweet delights Whose memories hold a bittersweet sting. Sweet is the love that she placed in my heart Bitter the ending, my soul torn apart. Entry for English Sonnets Poetry Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet 7/1/2020

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Date: 2/14/2020 1:50:00 AM
I was thinking of the same quote as Carolyn when reading this beautifully composed sonnet Gary. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/15/2020 12:21:00 PM
Thank you Connie. :)
Date: 2/7/2020 11:36:00 AM
Gary, they say it's better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all. Wish I could believe it but the pain of lost love holds me back. You conveyed your feelings beautifully in your excellent sonnet. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, carolyn
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/7/2020 11:38:00 AM
Thank you Carolyn. :)
Date: 2/7/2020 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations Gary! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. This contest was very tough to judge, for I was very strict, well done my friend, Emile.
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/7/2020 11:31:00 AM
Thank you Emile. :)
Date: 1/11/2020 1:06:00 PM
This lovely sonnet will speak to many who are grieving Gary. It is beautiful! : ) xxoo
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/11/2020 3:18:00 PM
Thank you Connie. :)
Date: 1/7/2020 5:01:00 PM
Hello Gary smith, sometimes love does not work out. Have a vice evening my friend.
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/7/2020 5:04:00 PM
Thank you Darlene. :)
Date: 1/7/2020 4:55:00 PM
Your sonnet is bittersweet, but your form and rhyme are sugar-coated to a reader. I enjoyed it very much. Well wishes in Emile's contest, Gary.
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/7/2020 4:56:00 PM
Thank you Lin. :)
Date: 1/7/2020 4:45:00 PM
A beautifully sad, written poem. Very nice Gary :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 1/7/2020 4:46:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. :)

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