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I believe- and there will be many who disagree, and my belief is this- when we are born a soul is given to us that first cry announces it, we are here and from that moment two exist the soul grows with us and stays with us until we die in this realm of Earth in that last dying gasp, the soul leaves the body and the body becomes nothing but an empty shell we grieve over that body where once dwelled a soul the soul travels up and exists in another realm we cannot understand the baby soul is talking but the baby only responses to needs the little child starts to hear the inner talking that talking just gets louder and louder as we age my soul is very chatty . . . . is it a female voice? a male voice? I really cannot tell but inside me is a voice called soul, alive and well the soul wants to make a difference, to leave an imprint to say loudly, I was here . . . . to turn it off- I meditate and think of nothingness it keeps trying to invade my tranquility but I push it away, be quiet for a moment, please my soul is conscious all the time, yes, even in dreams it is telling me things all day long when I am sad, so is my soul when I weep, it weeps too when I am heartbroken, my soul is broken when I am happy, it sings within me my life has been a tangled garden and my soul has many scars my soul watches when I write giving me the words I need it loves to meander forests and pick wildflowers oh- it can be very bossy too, do this, don't do that I don't know what to do....... at times I must quiet the internal chatter but it finds a way, always it finds a way to let me know you are not alone in this journey called life and I know when my last gasp comes and my beloved weep my soul will leave this Earthly body, and will live for all eternity but in another realm we do not understand many will not agree with me, and will protest strongly but this is- what I believe __________________________ May 12, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/My Soul Copyright Protected, ID 16-789-068-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 6/30/2016 4:51:00 PM
Wow from David in NZ. You commented on my blog. Am glad as it pointed me to to your poems. This one got chosen. I give it a 7. Hope your wing is on mend. Also glad you took risk and and dived into the soup. I also believe and have a guardian angel. l like your writing style which is respectful to others and leaves them to make up their own mind. All the best David
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Date: 5/14/2016 9:22:00 PM
So very true Broken Wings, when we die our bodies are empty shells and our Souls receive eternal life through Christ our Lord, if that's your believe, it is mine. Such a beautiful poem, really enjoyed reading this and have given it a 7
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Date: 5/13/2016 1:38:00 AM
Seems to me that many have the right answers before they have bothered to ask the right questions. You did a good job on this.
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Date: 5/12/2016 8:23:00 PM
+7 (duh?) Constance, if your message is truly sincere...you have a soul sister here!!I see your visual form as a pedestal of some type, perhaps for a candle?!//For reallly, if this were the only work you had shared you are at least' an awesome wordsmith and at best, a rare honest human... your verse and my vision are so like-minded...I shout reinforcement for your work and am sending it through the Universe,,.angels will hang by your doorstepO:)..., peace, jill
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Date: 5/12/2016 10:11:00 PM
jill, thanks for the 7 and the really nice comment and compliment, I love that the angels are hanging on my doorstep ...
Date: 5/12/2016 7:16:00 PM
faith is the water we drink to quench the thirsty soul....good luck in the contest
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Date: 5/12/2016 10:11:00 PM
Fredrick, lovely comment
Date: 5/12/2016 7:14:00 PM
I BELIEVE you for that is what I also think, Constance. I had no idea what Catie expected with this contest, but maybe I can try one now thanks to seeing your example. you nailed it!!! a SEVEN
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Date: 5/12/2016 10:12:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the 7 and happy I inspired
Date: 5/12/2016 7:03:00 PM
I love how your soul loves to pick wild flowers, that's beautiful. I love this poem Constance my friend :)
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Date: 5/12/2016 10:13:00 PM
Lewis, thanks for noticing that line, I loved that too

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