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My Soldier

My mama, my soldier my comfort, my shoulder to cry on, my boulder I rely on I've told her Nothing can replace the person that created you someone there to help you no matter what you're going through Someone who formed the person you became someone who has sheltered you through waves and waves of rain I can't say it enough, I love you with my whole heart you're there to put me back together every time I fall apart My mama, my soldier my comfort, my shoulder to cry on, my boulder I rely on I've told her Mama I hope I forever make you proud but you know I'll always test your patience as much as I'm allowed I know that you've forgiven all the stupid **** I've done and you've dealt with so much stress to ensure my childhood was fun I'm forever grateful for everything you've sacrificed for me I hope I am that apple that didn't all far from the tree My mama, ya dove you put no one above you life might push and shove you but I'll always love you My mama, my soldier my comfort, my shoulder to cry on, my boulder I rely on I've told her

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Date: 5/13/2014 3:25:00 PM
Hi Eric, nice to know you. I'm in awe of this poem! a whole new slant on a love for your mother. In most cases it has always been the mom giving of herself with love and guidance. and I admired the way you expressed yours for your mother. Great Write.
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Eric Schojan
Date: 5/13/2014 3:58:00 PM
Thank you so much Ralph!! I'm glad to have fellow poets like yourself to point out the good and unique parts of my poetry, things I don't realize while I write. Thank you again, and I will be visiting your page for some reading very soon :)
Date: 5/9/2014 11:30:00 AM
Aww that is sweet, you need a hug for that one :)
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Eric Schojan
Date: 5/9/2014 2:53:00 PM
:) I told my mom, "Tupac's mom got one, Kanye's mom get one, Eric Slowjam Schojan's mom needs one :P of far less quality cause im no rapper lol thank you csarah :)
Date: 5/9/2014 5:36:00 AM
so nice, great mothers day poem :), thank you for the nice welcome,
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Eric Schojan
Date: 5/9/2014 2:51:00 PM
Thanks Cynthia! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :) and you are very welcome!! And thank you for the visit and reading my writing!! :)

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