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My Sisters

My Sisters I have three sisters, it used to be four, but one is not here anymore. We were not raised together, so we all lived different lives. we are all different in our ways. My sister Dora lives up North. She had seven kids. She is now a widow, but with her kids and grand kids - she seems to have her life complete. My sister Gloria was a secretary, dhe never once got married. She said she didn't want to push a carriage. she was happy the way she lived. She is not with us anymore. Another sister lives close by. It's just about an hour's drive. Her name is Mary. A wonderful husband she did find. They raised a family of five, one boy and four girls. One more sister I do have for many years we didn't know where she was at. Estella is my sisters's name. We searched for her, but was in vain. Until 2007, she was found. We all got together to celebrate. Those are my sisters and now it's my turn. What can I tell you about by self - I am the one that wrote this poem. I am the oldest of all the girls. I am happy that we finally met. some families are lost forever, but I'm glad that I found mine.....
)8/11/2013 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo Note: This is all true, like a lot of what I write. We were all seperated when we were little. We found eachother when we grew up. Just another of many stories.

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  1. Date: 8/26/2013 7:55:00 AM
    My dear friend Lucy, I enjoyed reading another awesome poem of yours this evening. I'm the eldest of 3 siblings as well; but no sister at all. That's why I adopted & let myself be adopted, too :)). I love somuch your poem & the joy of your reunion w/ ur loving sisters. I truly believe that the best friends in this world are sisters. Thank you so much again for your very lovely poem & for being a loving sister & friend as well. God bless! love lots & big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 8:01:00 PM
    Hola Lucilla, Buen poema...The joy of reunion is felt in this one..You may enjoy "El Diablo" and "Senorita" of mine both written in the Spanish style.. Regards, Ken..

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 4:10:00 AM
    Very happy it all turned so well Lucy. Thank you for sharing this. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 9:45:00 AM
    i can imagine with the power you show us all in your wonderful poetry, that this came about, and oh you so richly deserve this, thank you for this awesome poem..

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 10:30:00 AM
    Excellent bio, great rhyme rhythm and flow, may Gloria rest in peace, it was lovely reading of your sisters, and how you all found each other, I have 3half sisters that were not in our lives, safely we came together after our feathers passing, but we see each other , but carol I see regular we are close, enjoyed the read, blessings sueellen

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 2:43:00 AM
    Families share a special bond. Thanks for sharing your story. Enjoyed your poem.

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 12:52:00 AM
    Intesting this story be it captures a part of me.

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 5:14:00 PM
    I am glad that I got to read a happy reunion story...Great work that you have penned...I enjoyed reading it this eve..Thanks for your visit to my work..It lifted my spirits..Sara

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 3:16:00 PM
    this is cool. And I see you too are the eldest. I loved being the oldest one, but NOW I am wishing I was the baby of the family!!

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 1:16:00 PM
    nice you found each other,,,,, we were all raised together after about two years ;}

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 1:07:00 PM
    Happy to hear that you were all reunited and got to share in each other's lives. Nice to know more about you as well, you are a gentle sweet soul. Hugs

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 1:04:00 PM
    Nothing like family.... I'm so glad to hear that you allfound each other at last.....God bless....

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 11:40:00 AM
    - I'm glad you found each other and having a good family / sisters and brothers. - It was nice to read your brother / sister poem Lucilla! - I have a sister who is two years older than me. - She has moved so far away in the country after my mother died, she would not be taking care of our father who is now left alone. - He has cancer, lung problems, diabetes and lost his balance after cancer / cell therapy - must use a wheelchair. (my "happy family") - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 10:07:00 AM
    My friend, you have a very sweet simple heart, you can think for your brothers and sisters. Very good sign of a good soul. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 7:31:00 PM
    Lucilla, I am sure your sister's were delighted to find you, your a beautiful soul, who wouldn't want you for their sister, glad you have family, it is so important to stay connected, I have one sister and one brother, they live in Montreal, but I get to see them every chance I get, love to you xxxx

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 7:26:00 PM
    Thanks for sharing your story.