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My Shortcomings

Being made of fragile sensibility I relish being lost in my own creativity Why, I even relish sharing it with the world Such does make me feel like I am a special girl But I am in all also made of shortcomings They do take me to more than causing some disturbing I do interact with difficulty With those who do make up the walls of my city I prefer to be alone To my own demons I do become prone I do keep my judgments to myself And do pretend to be a solo queen, seated on the highest shelf But hey, I do have a conscience Many a times, it does show its magnificence I do feel guilty, if I have been too cruel I do show humanity, to those caught in my spell I do have a sense of duty as well Even if all I do wish is to be a rebel A rebellious dreamer Safe under her own cover I do care to do my duty With all sense of civility So in the end I guess it all makes me a good person One who can be trusted, for whatever reason!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/19/2014 12:18:00 AM
Congratulations Anoucheka for your high marks in my contest. A first place win you grace... Verlena
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Date: 11/15/2014 11:41:00 AM
Excellent examination of your qualities and desire to grow, congratulations on your win, Anoucheka
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Date: 11/11/2014 9:34:00 AM
Congrats on the topplace win with this nice write,
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Date: 11/10/2014 8:41:00 PM
Congrad's on your win and being so open! Light & Love
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Date: 11/10/2014 3:52:00 PM
It seems in the end you possess important characteristics, and that's what counts. Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 11/10/2014 3:24:00 PM
many congratulations on your win:-) hugs jan x
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Date: 11/10/2014 8:31:00 AM
A deep look into ones self with measured conclusions. Congratulations on your well deserved top of the list first place win.
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Date: 11/10/2014 3:29:00 AM
Congratulations dear...Very good thoughts...Best wishes to you from India...
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