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My Shoes

MY SHOES My stylish fashionable friend owns cupboard full of hundred pair of shoes to match with her various colored dresses. On completion of perfection The spectrum of her choices is so broad. So difficult to choose the exact pair to tally with particular dress. I am free with three pair of shoes home use,walking, other uses So easy going is life avoiding confusion. totally time saving. Relaxed cheerful. One pair gets torn, next comes. 08/28/16 My Shoes poetry contest by Lewis Raynes

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Date: 8/31/2016 7:02:00 AM
Congrats on your win Anisha
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Date: 8/30/2016 8:02:00 PM
I like your take on the theme, Anisha! I agree...simplicity is best! Congrats on your HM placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/30/2016 11:11:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Anisha:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/30/2016 8:59:00 AM
I no longer feel the need for so many pair. Comfort takes precedence now. Well done and congrats, Anisha.
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Date: 8/30/2016 7:08:00 AM
Nice take on the shoe theme. My sister is like your friend :)
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Date: 8/28/2016 8:06:00 PM
Shoes is an all time poem Anisha. I like the points you have written. best of luck. Continue.
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Date: 8/28/2016 2:20:00 PM
Your poem made me smile Anisha. I hate buying shoes as I have quite wide small feet but I do have about 12 pairs I guess. good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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