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My Shadow

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My Shadow

You are my shadow who is always there with me in my good and bad turns.
You are always walking behind me as my mascot and hope you will always be there and will not leave me and go,
As I walk towards to seek my happiness ,but sadness  pulls me further towards it and my shadow left me all alone,
 I realized that my dreams and hopes had gone as I was walking at the dead end of the road.
Without my shadow I m standing on the rooftop though I m scared of height,
I watch the cars move beneath me,
And somehow it doesn't feel right.
Now I think of what I m doing,
I m walking all alone without my shadow.

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  1. Date: 12/25/2013 9:11:00 PM
    Interesting piece. Enjoyed reading. Always, Laura

    MAAHI Avatar CRYSTAL MAAHI
    Date: 12/26/2013 4:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you friend you too write good poems
  1. Date: 12/19/2013 12:08:00 PM
    Such a sadness flows within your words my friend! The last line of your write touched my heart with the loneliness and pain as I felt an emptiness in them. You write of sadness very well.

    MAAHI Avatar CRYSTAL MAAHI
    Date: 12/26/2013 4:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much for stopping by my poem i'm really glad you liked it