My Secret Forest

Pushing obscure view My eyes scavenge a fortress A scape revealed , bliss /|\ /|\ /|\ /|\ /|\

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Daver Austin

Date: 12/19/2012 2:56:00 PM

fine image. Congrats on the selection. daver

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/8/2010 5:28:00 PM

Nicely done!! Enjoyed this, Rick! ~ Carrie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/8/2010 4:45:00 PM

There's quite a view to be enjoyed beyond this fortress, Rick. And I love the way you drew the tree! Wonderful use of imagery. Love, Carolyn

Kim M

Date: 4/8/2010 4:02:00 PM

Very pretty scene I see in my mind's eye. Thick and lush forest, the kind of fir trees that grow only in cold climates, a haze of fog with water nearby, and maybe some grey/brown rocks of the mountain.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/8/2010 3:44:00 PM

Interesting write and design...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara