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My Savior

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My Savior

A crisp new smell, so refreshing is the taste, feels like new, with every breath I take. The chill that follows, a welcomed reprieve, bringing a sense of awareness, everything surrounds me. Mesmerizing sound, as each drops falls, which clams my mind, I feel at peace inside. The rain is my Savior, it always puts me at ease the miracle of nature, this is how it effects me. M.Mahauariki © 2012

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