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My Saddest Memory

"Imagine a lovely garden, tea for two, and this story.... " When I was but a child, My father he was my whole world. On the night that he died That world as I knew it... unfurled. My mother and I were not close. I was Daddy's little girl. I had my father's eyes of green, I had his hair, in wild curl. I was a child, I saw him die. No one should have such a memory. My life that night forever changed. I saw what no one should ever see. Suicide is an ugly word. It was never spoken about that night. Truth was hidden from all who asked. How could he think this solution right? A childhood memory from long ago Still brings tears when I recall The night my father chose to die, To run from life... and us all. ~~~ Francine Roberts~~~ 14/08/2011 for Constance's " I Fancy Another Sad Poem" contest

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Date: 8/23/2011 6:52:00 PM
This is such a heartfelt poem Francine, from beginning to end my heart was in my mouth. Good but upsetting write. Ryan J.
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Date: 8/23/2011 12:43:00 PM
I haven't been on Soup for a day or so and have just seen all the contest results I've missed! Please excuse this quick message of congratulations - well done on all your wins : ) Thanks - your contest was really good fun, Francine
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Date: 8/23/2011 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Constance's "I Fancy Another Sad Poem" contest Francine. I am honored to be on the winners list with you. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/21/2011 7:46:00 PM
Well done little babe, my thoughts are with you, a painful duty done, be brave little cute one, do, cos Johnson cares, little one.
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Date: 8/21/2011 12:23:00 PM
I could feel the pain in this offering. A win so well deserved. Congratulations
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Date: 8/21/2011 11:31:00 AM
It has to be one of the saddest memories of all, Francine . How terrible for you and your family. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/21/2011 11:09:00 AM
Congrats Francine on a wonderful third place win with this elegant entry luv.. enjoy as we are enjoying the Florida sunshine with three grand babies in tact.. so fun..luv..
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Date: 8/21/2011 5:47:00 AM
hey Francine congrats on your win, very sad indeed, David
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Date: 8/20/2011 9:34:00 PM
A blood chilling memory Francine...a worthy presentating indeed. Congratulations, Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/18/2011 4:28:00 AM
Francine- A REAL hug sent your way. My mother committed suicide. I did not see her die. I saw her body removed, and that was difficult enough. Also, I was a young adult, 20, not a child. I can only imagine the horror you experienced. My mom was bipolar- what they call it now. I always first tell people, "It's okay if you don't know what to say..." because most don't when you say, "suicide." So many emotions. This is a beautiful poem as well. And I hope it places high. PS hugged you whole time...
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Date: 8/16/2011 6:43:00 PM
Very sad poem i see, hurting still in memory, been there too at the gate, is ya gonna jump old mate, then got a little grin, it might hurt, a bloody sin, made me hesitate... no consolation:( loves ya babe!...
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Date: 8/16/2011 3:58:00 AM
Dear Francine, I didn't know about this tragedy and my heart goes out to you. It is written poignantly and the message brought tears to my eyes. God bless you for being able to go on after such an experience in childhood. A memorable and heartbreaking write for the contest. Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/15/2011 11:55:00 AM
This a heart breaking poem. I feel absorbed into darkness, I can imagine how you feel by reading this poem (despite based on real even or not).
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Date: 8/15/2011 11:18:00 AM
how cathartic it must be for you to have written this, francine... the outporing of your love is far greater than the sadness incurred.. sorry for rambling--i'm a counselor as well.. a transformational offering.. winning wishes with huggs! ;) nette
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