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My Rose

My rose, while growing in a garden not my own, is mine all the same Do not my eyes smile at her beauty and lose themselves in her scent? Do not my fingers tremble with anticipation just to touch her silky skin? While there may be pain when I hold her in my strong embrace It compares not to the loss I feel when at last her I release Others may measure her beauty and pen such odes to last in infamy Yet words can never paint her essence, or do poetic justice to her true loveliness My Rose, my perfect one will grow always in my heart for it is, and will remain her own. ~Christopher Thor Britt

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Date: 2/8/2016 8:40:00 AM
As the theme of the contest says, it really is all about love! Congratulations Chris on your well-deserved win! :) -HANS
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:18:00 AM
CHRISTOPHER, Stopped by to congratulate you on your awesome poem. **SKAT**
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Date: 2/6/2016 2:14:00 AM
Christopher, Congratulations on your "it's all about love" win. Love LINDA
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Date: 1/20/2014 10:48:00 PM
this is beautiful. And I don't know what it is, but suddenly I am seeing rose poems here. I wonder if it is a contest I dont' know about. Or maybe people are just feeling Rosy!!!
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Date: 1/20/2014 9:55:00 PM
This is such an ardent and lovely verse. I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Thanks for posting and sharing with us. : ) Always, Laura
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Christopher Thor Britt
Date: 1/20/2014 10:00:00 PM
Thank you for your kind opinion, Laura

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