My Rose

Like blowing a kiss from my open palm to you Catching it in mid air Holding it in my mind's eye The colour of passion satin petals falling outward Opening it's velvety silken heart Blushing petals in beauty picture perfect Falling down your stem above the thorns Sitting regally crowned On the air's heavenly scent In my eyes You are my candy In the morning dew upon you like crystal teardrops falling to the ground When the sun smiles at you kissing you with a beautiful rays Sparkling your divine beauty Scarlet red blushing You sit in your high heaven's with silken petals they say it all Kissed by your heavenly aroma Crowned the queen my red rose

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/1/2013 3:05:00 PM

I can see why this poem won first place in a competition! The vivid imagery makes the reader actually smell the "heavenly aroma" of the roses. Amazing poetry!....Thank you so much for your nice comments on my poem, "The Shy Rose". Yes, not all of my poems are dark, sad and dreary! :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2013 4:52:00 AM

OH THE SOFT SIDE OF YOU THIS I MUST SEE

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/31/2013 7:14:00 AM

It wins first in my favourites too Liam..You are very talented and writes passion so well...Awesome! and tnks for stopping by my poem : ) Charma

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 8/31/2013 8:01:00 AM

It would be lovely to.read a poem from a father to a daughter..Nothimg more beautiful..good day and tnks for honouring me with your beautiful lavender poem once again : )

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/31/2013 7:23:00 AM

i will post tomorrow another first prize poem i wrote for my beautiful daughter thank you deeply for the sweet and beautiful comment i left you a little lavender i wrote last night