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My Rocking Chair View

My Rocking Chair View 35 hundred feet high Above the valley Church steeples peak through the fog From an invisible Town As the Sun rises A Picture post card appears Miniature Houses Dotting the Landscape below Quite a scenic view Killington Mountain Smiles down at me from afar My Bigger Brother Groomed for a season of snow This is my Rocking Chair View Inspired by the Contest “ the view - a tanka “ Sponsored By Francine Roberts By HGarvey Daniel Esquire Written : September 17th (12:50 A.M.,2011)

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Date: 9/17/2011 10:37:00 AM
HG you only have 4 lines in the second stanza, needs 5 for a tanka
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