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My Rock

As the city unwinds and street lights dimmer, my shadow can be seen silhouetting the river. The water is icy, I am lost in thought, driven by determination, in search of my rock. I know you are out there, somewhere near, come a little closer to me; for I am not to fear. Your past is dark and haunts your soul, I honour your presence, you are never alone. The future is now, right here at this moment, Please hear my voice It is comfort, you once said. I know you feel lost and there is no way out, I beg you please, to shout; just shout. You are my rock the one whom I respect, don't leave this way; I will never forget. My body is quivering the fear is real you are my rock, I will help you to heal. Not like this me alone by the river, you out there, lost, we will get through this together. I hear nothing from you as the sirens draw near, my screams now blood chilling, though you are unable to hear. You are one with the river I have lost my rock, selfish are you for this memory you left.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 8/21/2019 1:38:00 PM
I just re-read my comment to you on this one, what a horrible person I am, that sounds so harsh and yet you were still gracious. (sorry)
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Date: 3/29/2017 5:17:00 PM
Thanks about my walnut tree. I had just gone through cancer surgery last summer and the leaves were a sign of hope for me.
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Date: 3/26/2017 4:24:00 PM
wow, such a moving piece this is, dear. You have a knack for putting very effective endings to your poems. I really liked finding this one. Can you see I am working my way upward and soon I will have read all your poems?
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Lynn Marie
Date: 3/26/2017 4:38:00 PM
...your comments are so fun and happy Andrea..thank you for all the smiles and insights...i appreciate you :-) ...your walnut tree has been on my mind..i am off to visit :-)
Date: 3/23/2017 4:08:00 PM
Once again I feel anguish seeping out of your words, Lynn. The loss of your 'rock' is strongly felt; a memory that will haunt the mind for a very long time. Regards // paul
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Lynn Marie
Date: 3/26/2017 4:40:00 PM
...Thank you so much Paul for your keen thoughts and kind words.:-)
Date: 10/12/2016 7:12:00 AM
Most of the stanzas are Quatrain, not "I don't know", 2nd and 4th line rhyme and, although the lines in a Quatrain should have similar syllable counts, they don't have to be exact.
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Lynn Marie
Date: 3/26/2017 4:41:00 PM
...thanks you James.

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