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My Retirement Place

LOVE crystal blue seas, with snow covered sands, dreaming of this place. Grass skirts, necklaces, pig roasts and coconut drinks. Soaking up the rays, hanging 10 and snorkeling, a FUN place to retire at. I'm sitting around the fire. Speak of island legends, take with me words of wisdom, and POETRY of this land. Fun and frolic contest cory long

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Busaba Patanawiroj

Date: 5/31/2011 4:50:00 AM

Thanks i love the beach and nature...now at Phuket Island, Thailand....I can see the clear pic here of your special place, thanks for sharing, Cory Long.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2011 7:31:00 PM

This is MY kind of place! I adore beaches. SOUnds like Hawaii! I can't find your top ten poem. Did you post it?

Cory Long
Date: 5/31/2011 5:13:00 AM

yes I have posted it.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/23/2011 3:55:00 PM

Sounds like an island paradise, Cory. Who wouldn't want to retire in such a fabulous place? Great entry for the contest and I wish you success. Love, Carolyn

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/23/2011 2:58:00 PM

Now this is how you retire:) Good luck in the contest, Cory! Matt

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 5/23/2011 11:56:00 AM

Cory,you make me want to go here.Good stuff for sure.Good luck to you sweets.And thanks for supporting my poems.Have a great afternoon...Sincerely,Kacey

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/23/2011 8:57:00 AM

Nice sanctuary you have created in advance for the retirement, I think you are too young to think about it,hahahah. Nice write it applies to me

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/23/2011 7:07:00 AM

thankxx for supporting my current contest cory.. good luck luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/23/2011 6:16:00 AM

Sounds beautiful cory and a lovely place to retire to in time.. always taking the poetry of course.. nice read ..delightful luv..