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My Raindrops

Come darling angels with wide open wings to tell tiny butterfly tales in our fairy- tale time; your rare astral love kindles my loveless life, lovely raindrops. Image 3 A 1st Place* in the following contest (judged on Dec. 4, 2020) Nov. 25, 2020 Double Tetractys 6 Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/7/2020 3:23:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful win, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/7/2020 1:59:00 PM

Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this sweet comment!!

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/6/2020 5:21:00 PM

Newton, your artistic pen spills delicate poetic petals across the page. Beautiful and especially moving as emotions spread beyond the margins. Congratulations for your excellent win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/6/2020 5:31:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan, for this impressively sweet comment, complement and the congrats!!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/6/2020 10:21:00 AM

Touching and bittersweet Newt. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/6/2020 5:30:00 PM

Thank you so much, Linda, for this lovely comment and the congrats!!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/6/2020 9:51:00 AM

Love the opening invitation, Newton. And the contrast between the love of children and the way that love causes a metamorphosis like a butterfly emerging from a cocoon in our "loveless day." Really like this one. Congratulations on your win! :) Thumbs up!

Newton Ranaweera
Date: 12/6/2020 10:12:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sam, for this immensely great comment and the congrats!!