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My Rainbow

At the end of my rainbow, I see a vacant space That makes me realise The colours were illusion And dreams were in vain.

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Rohaan Suresh

Date: 2/24/2016 11:04:00 AM

It is amazing to see how just a few lines can convey pure deep emotions. Amazing!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 10:57:00 AM

I love the imagery... LINDA

Lydia Chitra Jacob
Date: 2/22/2016 10:50:00 AM

Thank you

Casarah Nance

Date: 2/9/2016 9:08:00 AM

This has a sad feel to it, a defeated one, it has done what it has meant to do, the wording is melancholic and it is a very well done brevity.

Lydia Chitra Jacob
Date: 2/22/2016 10:36:00 AM

Thanks

Edward Ebbs

Date: 2/9/2016 6:55:00 AM

Your rainbow, your dreams of something more are not invain, they come from a passion within that make you special. Don't stop dreaming my friend, thank you for sharing :)