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My Quiet Place the Conservatory

My Quiet Place The Conservatory Its early, the mist is just lifting as I open the conservatory doors, the spider webs are everywhere just hanging from every plant twig and the gazebo, all trailing a million jewels of dew as the sun rises through the disappearing clouds. I wonder once again if the sun will sit in this layer for the day or give us some late summer warmth that we have missed this year. I always wonder at this time of year if the webs are here all year and we just don’t see them, and I don’t like that idea for two reasons, one is that I am scared of spiders, not scared they attack, but they just creep me out and even though I am a gardener and I know all the benefits of them, I just can’t stand them. The other reason I don’t like to think I have walked through all their hard work of the night spinning their webs as homes and food nets and we just barge through willy-nilly not caring. I open the doors wide once more The webs hang as jewels The new sunrise I gaze in awe Dew drips, drop, in small pools My spider fear makes me shiver But wonder takes its place Bejewelled forms of art quiver The spider’s daily resting place 4/09/2012 Contest Entry: My Quiet Place, sponsored By S Kendrick

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Date: 9/17/2012 6:38:00 AM
Mandy, soup mail ....Sara
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Date: 9/7/2012 1:55:00 AM
wOW!! this is a very wonderful write Mandy. This is a winner for me. Thank you so much for dropping by and your congratulatory comment on my win. I'm sorry, I've missed reading some of your poems because I was so busy the past few days then got a flu since the other day. Now, I'm recovering so I will go and read them especially the recent ones. Good luck and best wishes in the contest my dear. luv and hugs, leonora
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Date: 9/5/2012 2:49:00 AM
Great thoughts about spiders. I like the imagery of webs hanging as jewels. Nice work Mandy.
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Date: 9/4/2012 2:24:00 PM
lovely write, Mandy - just love the spider stanza
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Date: 9/4/2012 8:32:00 AM
Your quiet place, till i came along and stuffed it all up for you. 'Bejewelled forms of art quiver' a classic Mandy.
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