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My Proverb

My own proverb..... 'There is a difference between love and lust. If you choose love first, then it will make you feel more beautiful. But, if you choose lust first then your love is gone waste' - Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/5/2015 2:30:00 AM

Ravi, wisdom always shine in each of your poem!~Olive Eloisa thanks for sharing!

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/2/2015 6:43:00 PM

Love comes from the heart and it is the only thing that can last forever... You've penned great words of wisdom here, Ravi. Well done!

Len Gasun

Date: 4/11/2015 12:06:00 PM

This is absolutely true my dear friend, Ravi. This is a great write and haiku which I loved and enjoyed to read tonight. Thank you so much for sharing! Blessings to you! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 4/16/2015 2:49:00 AM

Thanks for your comment on my proverb my dear friend. Appreciated. Hugs.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/10/2015 5:03:00 PM

Nicely summed message, in this Haiku.

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 4/16/2015 2:50:00 AM

Thanks for your comment on my proverb my dear friend. Appreciated. Hugs.

Fatima Nusairat

Date: 4/9/2015 9:15:00 PM

Yes indeed:) I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, thanks for sharing ,and for visiting my page, much appreciated. Fatima

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 4/16/2015 2:50:00 AM

Thanks for your comment on my proverb my dear friend. Appreciated.

Tim Smith

Date: 4/8/2015 8:55:00 PM

Very true Ravi...we should always look for love first a7....Tim

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 4/16/2015 2:51:00 AM

Thanks for your comment on my proverb my friend. Appreciated.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/8/2015 2:24:00 PM

A wise and lovely proverb, Ravi. Lust is fire of straw...love is a continuous flame. All the best. // paul

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 4/16/2015 2:51:00 AM

Thanks for your comment on my proverb my friend. Appreciated.

Kamran Rashid

Date: 4/8/2015 9:57:00 AM

it is true and i belive like love is walking with soul in heaven and lust makes it all like hell,,c the world here,,lust of money,,power and wisdom...it is like ruining a garden and i hope to read more good PROVERBS ..#thankyou for reading and understanding my thought####wishing you great ,,rock As u WalK

Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 4/16/2015 2:52:00 AM

Thanks for your comment on my proverb my friend. Appreciated.