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My Precious Teddy Bear

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My Precious Teddy Bear



Come with me my little Teddy,
     Be with me till night and day,
          Sit beside me and be happy,
               Coz I’m here for you to stay.

                    Teddy bear, my teddy bear,
                         Every time you are near,
                              Happiness inside my heart,
                                   You and I will never be apart.

                                           Many years has just passed,
                                                 My teddy never takes a bath,
                                                 Coz I’m afraid the colors will fade,
                                           And I don’t want either to trade.

                                      The smell is really disgusting,
                                 I still hug it when I am sleeping,
                           If my mother try to wash my Teddy Bear,
                     The sound of my loudest wail filled in the air.

                My Teddy Bear may look topless and old,
           It’s my priceless gift more than a pure gold,
     We love each other till the end of time,
My sweet little Teddy, you are all mine.


January 4, 2013
Maria Paz Samelo
For Sandy's "Teddy Bear Picnic" Contest
3rd Place Winner


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  1. Date: 2/3/2013 6:26:00 PM
    big congrats, this was a very well deserved win!

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 11:36:00 AM
    Wonderful poem and love the shape of it !! Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 8:56:00 AM
    My biggest congratulations on your third place win my dearest friend, Maria! Cheers! love always, Leonora

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 6:18:00 AM
    Nice poem Maria and congrats on your win. Cheers

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 11:33:00 AM
    First love of a wee one can't be denied. You express this beautifully in this wonderful entry. Congratulations on your win Maria!

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 10:04:00 AM
    Congrats Maria on your big win, loved your form poetry, xxx

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 8:52:00 AM
    A true testament to the love of a Teddy. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 6:59:00 AM
    Precious indeed, congrats.

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 5:31:00 AM
    congrats on yor win Maria...

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 1:30:00 AM
    HJi Maria congrats on your win in the contest, liked this very much, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 11:44:00 PM
    Awww try a dry powder cleanser on poor smelly Ted....Seren

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 10:02:00 PM
    congratulations on your excellent win....

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 9:34:00 PM
    Hi Maria, Congratulations :-) on a cuddly interesting childhood thought and poem. Enjoyed your "Teddy Bear Picnic" winning poem in SandI's contest, ~Always* PD

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 9:20:00 PM
    thank you' SandyIvy

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 4:14:00 AM
    wonderful write Maria,best wishes for the contest

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:56:00 PM
    So nice to read your work this evening. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 8:25:00 AM
    Well-structured poem. Good luck.

  1. Date: 1/7/2013 10:07:00 AM
    For a sweet poem, I am sure teddy bear is just adorable. - Good luck with your poem in the contest Maria. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 1/7/2013 9:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks friend Anne Lise..Happy New Year!!
  1. Date: 1/6/2013 2:14:00 AM
    Hi Maria love this brill teddy write, good luck in the contest, all the best Owen

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 1/6/2013 8:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks a lot friend Owen :) Happy new year!
  1. Date: 1/5/2013 8:50:00 PM
    a very good entry... love what you did... a sure winner... you know what i like about this poem... it is totally the opposite of my teddy bear poem... adding this beyond awesome Teddy Bear poem to my faves... hope you do not mind...love...pd

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 1/6/2013 8:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    million thanks dear PD for your nice comments.. (^_^) a blessed day always!! hugs
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