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My Prayer of Hope

Lord, I come before you to ask a favour Or to bargain for a friend She has given up the fight, Oh Lord, And justifies it as the end. So I offer that little piece of heaven I have been so praying for So she’ll most want to laugh with me again Unless I’m just not wanted anymore. Then take all the good, Father, On this earth I’ve ever done To remind her of my love And it’s like her I’m trying to become. Finally Lord take my life for her’s For it is unknown how long I will live So like her why should I try, but I will Because it is all I have left to give. Brenda Elizabeth Rose

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Date: 2/18/2016 8:47:00 AM
Lovely selfless prayer Brenda, so well penned too. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 2/13/2016 10:47:00 PM
brenda, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/13/2016 2:41:00 PM
I agree with Diane, Brenda. A beautifully crafted prayer in the guise of a very elegant poem - Simply charming! A seven! My best regards. :) john
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Date: 2/13/2016 1:31:00 PM
that is a lovely prayer. God never gives up on us even in times we may give up on our selves, he will find a way. he always does Amen
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Date: 2/13/2016 1:04:00 PM
Miss Hope (a kind of Robinson) who never gives up. Do you know the story of Plyana, a little girl who teaches everybody the game of happiness?
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