My Prayer

Awaken my soul Oh God I am ready for your power Awaken my mind Oh God I am ready for your peace No longer will I fade away Today I take a stand No longer will I be silent Today I follow in your steps Tired of the battle Worn out by the war But I will not abandon I will not be shaken I move as you want me I only speak when witnessing I break the chains holding me back For time is short, and hell is eternal

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John Freeman

Date: 6/18/2009 12:05:00 PM

A very positive poem Jessica, God is love, and he is in your heart, the center most part of your being, your power to overcome the strife, you've been calling your life! Keep digging deep within yourself, your power of love is there. This poem is the type of positive things you should write, it will change your life.

Mary Duhart

Date: 6/1/2009 6:55:00 AM

Amen Jessica...as long as we put God first he will lead us and guide us each step of the way. Thank you for commenting on my work also.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/31/2009 12:10:00 PM

excellent religiuos verse. Light & Love

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/31/2009 8:28:00 AM

lovely poem Jessica! Well penned and deep with emotions, beautiful write my friend. :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/31/2009 6:51:00 AM

beautiful,your wisdom to see not the short holiday we live here with ups and downs,you see what we all must see,the happiness of eternal life--charma

Diane Christian

Date: 5/31/2009 6:37:00 AM

Amen Jesica a wonderful poem so powerful and a wonderful prayer, he is our strength and we can do all things through him, God bless you from diane