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My Poor Overnight Guests

I am a little bit of a trickster It has to be said A wee bit mischievous Somewhat bonkers in the head Friends came to stay the night So l played a cheeky joke Showed them to their room Explained all for when they woke I mentioned if they needed the loo In the middle of the night No need to stumble in the dark We do this and its works a delight I bent down and pulled out from under their bed An vintage enamel handled pee-pot….full of wee Initial awkward horror followed by hysterical laughter As it was a pee pot full of apple juice you see!

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Gail Debole

Date: 10/13/2023 2:30:00 PM

Hi Deb, So funny! Well-written too. - Gail

Akkina Downing

Date: 10/1/2023 6:20:00 PM

Lol… Deb, that’s hilarious :)

Deb M
Date: 10/5/2023 5:05:00 AM

Why thankyou Akkina….l appreciate your comment! Debx

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/1/2023 10:19:00 AM

Lol! Deb, This is soooooo funny. I enjoyed the laugh. Have a great day:-)Alexis

Deb M
Date: 10/1/2023 1:05:00 PM

Glad it made you laugh Alexis….it was so funny at the time! Debx

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 10/1/2023 9:22:00 AM

You rascally jokester you.

Deb M
Date: 10/1/2023 1:12:00 PM

Indeed l am Jerry! Ha….Debx

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/1/2023 7:01:00 AM

Deb, you're an absolute master of mischief and wit. Your poem had me bursting with laughter, unable to contain the joy that radiated from every line. The way you effortlessly weave words together is truly a sight to behold. Have a nice day

Deb M
Date: 10/1/2023 7:42:00 AM

I really love that Lasaad…. “Master of Mischief ” or should it be “Mistress of Mischief” either or ….l love that title hehe!! Thankyou lovely Lasaad! Debx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/1/2023 2:44:00 AM

Great laugh though it brings memories of WW2 when all was destroyed and had to use a pot. Still now it's laughter time. Cuddles.

Deb M
Date: 10/1/2023 7:47:00 AM

Aww l hope the memories weren't too awful for you Victor….Cuddles galore my friend! Debx

Aysha Nuwas

Date: 10/1/2023 12:22:00 AM

hahahahaha this is so funny, loved this :)

Deb M
Date: 10/1/2023 7:45:00 AM

Thankyou Aysha…it was so funny….their faces of utter disbelief….it was hard for my husband and l to keep straight faces when l pulled it out from under the bed but we manged!! Ha…..Debx

The Situation

Date: 9/30/2023 8:43:00 PM

Did they laugh?

Deb M
Date: 9/30/2023 10:43:00 PM

Absolutely!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/30/2023 8:28:00 PM

GOOD one, Deb! Janice

Deb M
Date: 9/30/2023 10:44:00 PM

Thanks Janice! Debx

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 9/30/2023 6:20:00 PM