My Poetry Line

My Poetry Line Jumbled and sloppy broken tattered and choppy Yet, you are mine Random revels revealed disfigured characters concealed Still, you are mine Scattered moments thoughts of the day things remembered and things to pray reflective art penned Blue Black or Grey memories forever on display Yes, you are mine Your canvas has many forms computer, napkin blank, lined, or torn Your beauty shines Though... you make no sense sometimes Still, you are mine My poetry line Lay

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Jl Sadberry

Date: 4/4/2011 6:35:00 AM

Smile, *^_^* Again, I find such loveliness amid this flowing sweetly verse my dear, Walayee. = I can almost feel its colours reflecting from the canvas once more painted in pretty, towards the view it seems of poetry and perhaps even another or others, seeping into my own depths and playing its beautiful tune. == You are very gifted and quite lovely my dear. === love, jasper

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/29/2011 8:25:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your creative poetry today as always Lay. Have a wonderful day and may you find even more inspiration to write as the day goes by. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/28/2011 8:21:00 PM

like this, i find taking words at random sometimes works, from all what you have written here, Lay, really love this concept, this imagery. Harry

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/28/2011 7:27:00 PM

I really like this one Lay, (so true to form)& certainly not (other peoples norm) a 7