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My Place

My heart wishes to stop beating. The strength I have to go on is fleeting, as I have no way of competing. She has a granite shell but a heart made of cotton. To make her worry for someone she used to care for would be rotten. So she doesn't see my despair, when she is near I take the knife and carve a smile on my face. I sit their in the ground as she walks by, and I know I have found my place.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/24/2015 6:31:00 PM
Zachary, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/23/2015 6:53:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem Zachary, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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